*Drip* *Drip*
*Drop* *Drop*
I think my heart is going to stop
Though if you tried to find my pulse all you’d feel is cold, forgotten metal
Left without its luster.
She said she’d love me forever once,
Back when I was shiny and new,
And I used to think it was true,
But now I’m not so sure.
We used to scream her favorite songs for hours and hours on end
For music was her specialty
We talked about the future and how bright it could become, as long as we stayed together
She cried on my hard metallic shoulder, only softened by her touch
And for a moment I was enough.
As we sat together on the roof
staring at the stars.
I hoped it would last forever.
But soon enough she met a boy,
a boy who stole her heart.
She ran off to the sunny beach and left me all alone.
They say I shouldn’t feel a thing, for how could I, I’m just a bot?
A stupid piece of metal with no feelings, heart, or thoughts
But underneath those rusted bolts
and wires is a girl
who only wished
her old best friend
had ever really loved her.
this is so good!!
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i like the exclamation points!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@@@@@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Q!QQQQ!
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I love this so very much
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This packs a punch
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wow i love this!!
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yo
the metal
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“Back when I was shiny and new,”
we’re sorta reading this in B5 and a kid just yawned, but don’t be offended, i don’t think he was yawning at your writing, i think it was directed at me,
also, two girls are sorta whispering, i don’t think thyey’re interested much in your blog (ohhhhhh kyle starting drama)…..
wait, one of them could be you
like, i don’t know who everyone’s blog is………..i mean, i can look, but i’m trying not to
i’m losing the class
this is going on too long, i’m going to end this comment now
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🤠🔫
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